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Guardian Angels: ComfortSnow crashed into the floor to ceiling windows of Port Hanshan. It was colder here than he was used to, the turian spoiled with perfect conditions on the Citadel.

Garrus Vakarian leaned against the window's frame while he waited patiently for his commanding officer to find him. Mika Shepard was currently negotiating with the administrator for a pass into Peak 15. He did not envy her, just one look at the salarian told him the man was a complete bastard.

Liara was not far off, sitting on a bench across the room. The young asari had her head bent forward, eyes closed. She looked like the weight of the world was on her shoulders and his heart

I will await you across the sea...

Game: Mass Effect 3
Characters/Pairing: Thane Krios, Kolyat Krios, f!Shepard

"Kalahira, mistress of inscrutable depths, I ask forgiveness".

I am begging the elevator to goes faster, and clenching, and unclenching fists. Just a moment, just ... Why? I knew he was going to die, but not now, not so! No! There are a lot of words that I want to say and now … is it too late? No! I biting lip and covered face by hands, wanting to relieve the groan that is ready to break free. And at this moment the door has dispersed with a quiet rustle.
Excited voices and hoarse shouts stunned me. It has made me

Mass Effect 3 Alternate Ending Choices SPOILERS

Alternate/Personal Ending: Mass Effect 3

The Child reveals itself to be the creator of the Reapers. The child states the Reapers solve the solution to chaos but because you have made it this far in the construction of the Crucible and attached it to the Citadel, the creator gives you some respect and gives you a choice to decide. You choose whether to end all synthetic life thus killing apart of yourself as well as the geth and EDI but ultimately ending the Reapers, Synching your mind with the Reapers ultimately controlling them and ending the war on the organics ultimately ending your life, or sacrifice your being to fuse all organic and sy

Mass Effect 3: The Tide TurnsA massive pulse of energy erupted from the Citadel. The waveform crashed against the approaching Reapers. Great electric storms arced across the surface of each machine. Then they drifted along their vectors. On board SSV Kilimanjaro, Admiral Hackett ordered a status report.

His sensor officer replied, "Minimal heat signatures from the enemy. Kinetic barriers down."

"All ships, this is Admiral Hackett, target the nearest Reaper and hit it with everything we got!" said Hackett over the fleet comm.

The combined firepower of hundreds of ships tore apart the nearest target. Then it shifted to a second and then a third as more surviv

A dream of an endNow I know many many many fans have written their own perfect ending to ME3, but allow me to write a quick overview of an ending with multiple options for the choices you made. I hope to present a reasonable and logical ending to one of my favorite sci-fi series ever.
*SPOILER*
Nothing changes up to the exact moment when Hacket informs Shepard that the crucible is not firing.
Shepard is then offered both a paragon and renegade trigger option, paragon being disable reapers renegade being transfer control to the citadel console. There is no god child ultimatum.
Shepard will lunge and hit the decided button and collapse to the floor. Shepard will then receive a call from Hacket informing Shepard that the crucible worked. If Shepard's war assets were at a certain level the player will receive one of three endings.
Outcome 1)
If assets are very low and readiness is 60 percent or lower Shepard will exclaim it's finally over and a montage of all of the player's key decisions will play highlig

Shepard: War HeroElysium was the perfect place for a shore leave. What Jon Grissom, Alliance hero, had described as a place "where the sun has the decency to set at a reasonable time", was so much more: It beckoned humans and aliens alike to relax on its surface. The only downside to the colony was that it was located in the Terminus systems, meaning it was in pirate and mercenary territory.

Commander Shepard took in his surroundings. The military station where he would be spending his shore leave as a large complex made of elegant swooping architecture. The base itself was at the base of a large mountain, with only a short bridge to co

Mass Effect 3 - Alternate Ending*THIS CONTAINS SPOILERS, DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU'VE PLAYED THROUGH THE ENDING OF MASS EFFECT 3!*

After the confrontation with the Illusive Man and the talk with Anderson (uncut version), you'll get a few different endings depending on your EMS.

If the EMS is low, Admiral Hackett will radio Shepard, telling him the crucible isn't firing, and Shepard will fall unconscious and bleed out. We will be shown how the ground team you brought with you is killed by Harbinger, and the entire fleet including the Normandy will be utterly defeated. After the credits a cinematic will show archeologists from the next cycle finding Liara's time capsule. (Ex

Why I Hold the LineMy little disclaimer for this horrendous TL;DR is as follows, and you can bet I'm going to employ my own stereotypes with a little humorous intent. I'm a girl gamer, (like everyone else here) a huge Mass Effect fan, an avid reader, a writer, a watcher of far too much TV and too many movies, and an English Literature grad student. Ergo, I write words. Lots of them. It's practically my job.

I'll probably bump this just a couple times, because I'd love for someone to read it.
If you really want to skip to the goodies, run to the bolded "And now for why I am still here."

So.

Hello to all my fellow Holders of the Line, to the supporters of

Making Days Longer - Chapter 1

Spring 2164
Laser dot trembles on the skull. Spice on the spring wind, sunset eyes defiant in the scope.Her body trembles. Not fear, indignation. Her mouth moves…
The assassin sits transfixed, unable to act, unable to think as this scene plays out before his eyes. This assignment should have been simple, but it was the simple tasks that were the easiest to complicate.
/*/*/*/
Two weeks previous
He stood before the one called Shrimaanharkaara, as he had dozens of times before. The hanar's body flashed with vivid streaks of light as it spoke without words in a language Thane is privileged enough to understand.
"I regret calling upon you

KalahiraMass Effect

Guided Meditation -
Shepard and Thane

The captain's quarters are far off from the engineering deck, but I can still hear the hum of the engines if I shut the music off and listen to the quiet. Most nights, it's enough to get me to sleep.

Most nights.

I'll lay back and watch the stars crawl by through the skylight, or watch the fish flit around in their tanks. Slowly, it becomes harder and harder to keep my eyes open. I'll roll over so the glow of the fish tank doesn't penetrate the darkness behind my closed eyes as I drift off to sleep.

Peaceful…?

The darkness is overwhelming. If I squint really, really hard I can

Mass Effect 3: The LastMass Effect 3: The Last

A fix-fic based on my take of the Reapers motivations and the ending:

I pressed the button on the console, but nothing happened. Hackett screamed in my ear. I had nothing for him except painful grunts. The universe turned black.

"Shepard, wake up," said a child like voice.

"Where am I?" I asked.

A projection of some sort stood before me.

It looked like the kid in Vancouver, the one playing with the fighter model, the one that died….

"Shepard, wake up," it repeat.

"Who are you, what are you?"

"I am a remnant, a fraction," it said.

"I don't…" pain ripped away my strength, "I don't have time for games;

Mass Effect 3: AftermathPart 1

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Three weeks after the Battle of Earth.

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Faint voices broke through the darkness.

"Liara, he is awake," said one. The last time I heard that voice I come back from the dead. Had she brought me back again?

Someone squeezed my hand. Warmth tingled through the fingertips.

"It's alright Shepard, I'm here, just go back sleep."

"Liaraaa...."

Moments later my eyes snapped open. It took a second for the world to come into focus. Liara hummed a song as she arranged a bouquet of flowers to my right.

"Good morning!" she said. She bent down and kissed my forehead. "You had us worried for a bit there. Miranda went to talk to t

Promises: a Mass Effect 3 Fan EditPromises

          "I tried, Shepard." The Illusive Man said, as he placed the barrel of his pistol to his head and pulled the trigger.
          His limp body fell onto the floor, and Shepard watched as his cold, steel-blue eyes went dark.
          "…Shepard!...-an you…me?" Admiral Hackett's voice filled her head.
          "This is Shepard, what is it Admiral?" She said into her radio, her free hand putting pressure on her wound.

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My little story on Thane. Mainly a new piece for the Retake ME3 fiction contest.

I was inspired by Thane's and Mordin's sacrifices. I felt that everyone was doing Mordin's so I went for Thane.

Thane is the man if I have never said that before xD

And accept this as my apology if I dont do Thane justice... to be honest I didn't feel like I did, but its my best effort. I'm sorry everyone!

My blog is here: (have been a little busy so i havent updated it too recently

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~FiyoriTakeshi Apr 22, 2012

I love it!

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*NotCras Apr 23, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

no thank you!!

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~FiyoriTakeshi Apr 23, 2012

Just being honest

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*NotCras Apr 23, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

lol thanks... is your pink emoticon hugging the blue one (which i assume is me) to death?? I gosh... *writes a really really bad fan-fic to save himself* xD lmao

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~FiyoriTakeshi Apr 24, 2012

Apparently yes >_<! Heh I don't think its bad. I'm a picky reader so the fact that I was reading your stuff means your pretty amazing n__n

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*NotCras May 6, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

well thank you very much for that great compliment then!

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~FiyoriTakeshi May 6, 2012

Your very much welcomed and thank YOU once again for being soo talented >_<!

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~Predator4170 Apr 19, 2012 Student Artist

Thane, Mordin, Kaidan, then Legion. all there passing has been hard on my heart. i viowed to make there sacrifices died in vain. But at the ending, every one is dead because of the mass relays blowing up then the promise made to liara that i will always come will ever happen. because bioware does not care about the fans opinion and feelings.

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*NotCras Apr 19, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

thats why there are fan-fics to fix that!! Forget their ending, just make your own headcanon!

but I wont say anything about Bioware not caring about their fans until I see the extended cut ending. If they dont redeem themselves, well they're done for I'd assume right??

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